Informal Peach Revisited

It seems I've come some way. This was originally just a "trace bitmap" kind of vector with a lot of tweaking done to it. For this redo, I just used some samples from the old vector (unfortunately the vector file was lost!) and redrew a lot of this by hand. If it doesnt show progress I dont know that I'll ever "progress". Original Vector Shown Here: [link]

The woman in the picture is Mary aka ` devilicious
She gave me permission to do it last time. and has given me permission to do one or two other things with her stock and non-stock images. This is a non-stock image reference known as "Peach". Please check out Mary's stuff if you haven't already. She's pretty huge around dA as it is!

Thanks in advance for your sincere critique. I'd really appreciate a proper critique or "advanced critique" than just saying you like it or don't, but I'll take whichever you're willing to give!

By the way, the style of composition is similar to Adam Pointer's though it's not ripped from anything he's done. I just saw his stuff in issue 59 of Computer Arts Projects a while ago, and I loved it!

+joe